It measures like the Sea
In mighty—unremitting Bass
And Blue Monotony
Till Hurricane bisect
And as itself discerns
Its sufficient Area
The Heart convulsive learns
That Calm is but a Wall
Of unattempted Gauze
An instant's Push demolishes
A Questioning—dissolves.
-F960, J928, 1865
To be this deep into the oeuvre of Emily Dickinson and still be discovering great poems one after another is such a gift. They “measure like the sea," but somehow never become in the slightest monotonous.
This one is powerful, in part, because of its amazing imagery and sound.
Let’s start with that image. We picture a mighty sea with a tiny shoreline on either side, "narrow banks." The sea is so large and blue that it becomes monotonous to the eye. But here comes a hurricane to “bisect” the sea, to cut the blue in two. This causes water to spill out over the wall of calm air and onto the narrow banks, which demolishes...what? The Questioning? What do we imagine this Questioning looks like? It’s a good question. The Questioning, the one that presumably caused the hurricane in the first place, is demolished, and then dissolves back into monotonous blue.
Now let’s listen to the sounds. Great poets tend to write onomatopoeically. Dickinson is a master at this, and the poem at hand a master class in sound carrying sense. Note how many words here carry their own meaning in their sound. “Narrow” narrows in at the rr. "Banks" has the hard K ending which forms in this poem the sense of a hard stop at the end of the line. (Think how different it would be if she had written “shores” instead of "Banks" here). "Sea" has an open vowel ending at the end of the line, like an endless expanse. "Bass" carries within it a bass sound. (You can hear this if you say "Bass" in your lowest Bass register). There is a sense of cutting in the “sect” of "Bisect." There is lots of area in the vowels surrounding the r in "Area." The word “Convulsive” sounds like something convulsing. The z sound of "Gauze" has a softness like the fabric of gauze. "Calm" is one of the calmest of words, the way it softly ends in “alm.” "Push" sounds like air being pushed. "Dissolves," to my ear, sounds like sound breaking down. The English language is more onomatopoeic than we may realize. A great poet is fully aware of the meanings of sound.
Look at what Dickinson does, for instance, with the M in the first stanza,
It Measures like the Sea
In Mighty—unreMitting Bass
And blue Monotony.
The M surfaces again and again like the throbbing hum of waves.
Another bit of sound-play is the way the bashing B sounds in the first stanza gives way to the calm endings of “Gauze” and “Dissolve” in the second stanza. The hurricane of sound has decidedly died down.
Beneath sound and image we have meaning. This one is fairly easy to follow, but it leaves us with a disruptive hurricane of a “Questioning.” The question, perhaps, is one that is being asked of another; a heart extending itself. The answer to this question may profoundly shake up the calm of the heart, create a hurricane which will break it in half. But perhaps an answer is unnecessary for a disruption. The Question itself upsets the mighty blue expanse of the heart. Now that the sea has been disrupted and spilled over there is no more shore to retreat to. There is only chaos of feeling and then eventually a settling down which dissolves the question itself.
You return back to the mighty blue monotony. The poem is a loop.
I notice upon returning back to the first line that it’s a declarative statement, “The heart has narrow banks" It's an odd way to start the poem. It would make more sense as a second line. The heart is like a mighty sea/ encased by narrow banks." But by starting with this line it puts an emphasis on the banks themselves. The heart, we are told, has narrow banks. But what of them? We come to find out they are not a safe space. The hurricane caused by the push of need is bound to drown the spectator on the shore.
Another question in the poem is raised with the phrase, "sufficient area."
Another question in the poem is raised with the phrase, "sufficient area."
as itself discerns
Its sufficient Area
The Heart
Its sufficient Area
The Heart
This begs a question. What is sufficient area for a heart?
Perhaps that is the question that bisects the sea?
The heart has to discern this for itself.
-/)dam Wade l)eGraff
Hurricane Emily, an extraordinarily powerful
and early-season tropical cyclone in 2005

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