Runs evenly — and true —
But let a Splinter swerve —
'Twere easier for You —
To put a Current back —
When Floods have slit the Hills —
And scooped a Turnpike for Themselves —
And trodden out the Mills —
F563 (1863) J556
The verbs in the last stanza dramatize the impossibility of a brain ever going back to its comfortable groove or, if you will, rut, once derailed. The first stanza begins calmly, both in language and image. The brain is running "evenly – and true" in its accustomed channel. It encounters some setback or glimpses some new truth or vision, but nothing cataclysmic. It is a "Splinter" not a logjam, not a stick of dynamite. Dickinson's insight is that sometimes a splinter is all it takes to set a life, or at least a mental life, careening out of control.
The second stanza looses the calm current of the millrace. The floodwaters "slit" the hills, an image managing to be surgical, violent, and yonic at the same time. A turnpike has been "scooped" out of the earth as if a giant trowel has been wielded against the landscape. The last image is that of the mills and factories "trodden" into oblivion. It is wild nature against the careful constructs of man. Such a flood can never again be tamed to its small channel.
It depicts perhaps part of the poet herself and helps account for the energy beating against the bounds of language in her poetry.
The power in this poem hinges on its physicality with splinters in the brain; floods slitting, scooping and treading. I can't help seeing a dissection going on here. Or are brains a bit like trains: on the track they run smoothly, but once derailed - look out!ReplyDelete
Yes, a very physically powerful poem.Delete
In all her fear of the world, even amidst the fear, she was a fearless inner voyager. Her naked look at herself continually awes me.ReplyDelete
the whispers in your ears
Admist the whispers lie.
Makes me think of Stephen Greenblatt’s excellent book “The Swerve” - explaining the altered courses of history!ReplyDelete
Thank you for this great blog. It helps me a lot.ReplyDelete
I want the figure of speech of this poem, please??ReplyDelete
My best advice is to look up 'figure of speech examples' -- and when you get a good notion of what the term means you should have no problem finding it in this poem. Also, you could read my explication ...Delete
You sent me to the dictionary on this one. I thought "yonic" must be a misprint for something - until I looked it up and discovered that it fits your meaning exactly. Wonderful explication of this powerful little poem.ReplyDelete