'Tisn't
all Hock – with us –
Life
has its Ale –
But
it's many a lay of the Dim Burgundy –
We
chant – for cheer – when the Wines – fail –
Do
we "get drunk"?
Ask
the jolly Clovers!
Do
we "beat" our "Wife"?
I
– never wed –
Bee
– pledges his – in minute flagons –
Dainty
– as the tress – on her deft Head –
While
runs the Rhine –
He
and I – revel –
First
– at the vat – and latest at the Vine –
Noon
– our last Cup –
"Found
dead" – "of Nectar" –
By
a humming Coroner –
In
a By-Thyme!
F244
(1861) 230
Emily
has a drinking buddy and he is a Bee. They live to drink and in fact the poet
expects that some day they will be “Found dead” of drink by noon! This darling
poem, as in “I taste a Liquor never brewed” (F207) where the poet is an “Inebriate
of Air” and a “Debauchee of Dew,” celebrates the heady intoxication of being
alive and in a lovely outdoors. Make no
mistake, this inebriation for Dickinson wouldn’t take place in city or
town with shopkeepers and shoppers. Her inebriation has more to do with
imbibing a more pure air and observing the flowers, creatures, and skies.
Fortunately for Dickinson, her family could afford a large property with garden
and orchard; and as a single woman Dickinson never had to give up her delights
to support husband and children. Yes, she was the primary caretaker of her
chronically ill and housebound mother, and her father depended on her baking
and other tasks, but she was withdrawing from the social world at this time and
so her spare time was all her own.
A suitably dainty flagon |
In
this poem she gives her version of a drinking poem. She and her Bee buddy may
live “by the quaffing” (great word!) but they don’t always get the best stuff. “Hock”
is a German wine, usually understood to be from the prized Rhine regions. They
don’t get that all the time, for “Life has its Ale,” or more bitter drinks. Often,
however, they drink a “Dim” or past-prime Burgundy. And sometimes they don’t
get anything – the “Wines – fail” – and in those occasions they boost their
morale by chanting poetry.
Tresses on a bee's "deft Head" |
Then
a bit of boasting: do they get drunk? You betcha: just ask those “jolly Clovers”
we were just guzzling for their sweet nectar. But they are good blokes. They
don’t beat their wives! Well, the poet admits, she doesn’t have one (and in
this poem the poet takes on the voice of a man – more appropriate at the time
for a drinking song). Thankfully, the Bee doesn’t beat his either. In fact he
toasts her, raising his tiny glass. In a sudden line of lyricism, Dickinson
adds that his “minute flagons” are “Dainty – as the tress – on her deft Head.”
An image of a feminine bee with
golden hair comes to mind.
As
long as the Rhine wine flows, the two companions enjoy their revels. By the
time noon rolls around they’ve drunk as much as they possibly could. The poet
expects they’ll be found lifeless by a “humming Coronor” bee as they lie
sprawled out in a bed of fragrant thyme. That last phrase is a cute pun: it
implies the phrase, “Death by…,” in this case Death by Thyme nectar for the bee. The pun
lies in the homonym “by Time,” for the poet. And doesn't Time eventually take us all?
It’s
a merry poem, full of fun.
I love this blog!
ReplyDeleteI agree with everything you said! And I obviously you're much more insightful than me. You suspected in the line "do we beat our wife" " I-never wed" alludes that the poet is speaking from a man's prespective, however there have also been numerous rumors/supported evidence of Emily being a lesbian/having lesbian affair with her best friend.
ReplyDeleteI apologise for the messed up formatting there's some glitch in here.
DeleteWhile all that about ED's sexuality may be true, it doesn't affect whether or not she is adopting a male persona in the poem.
Deleteundoubtedly! The poem does reflect a male persona in and I agree with you on that. I was referring to the fact that if the speculations are true, that line can also be interpreted as her being casual and open about her sexuality in her poetry,which at the time she didn't knew were going to be published.
DeleteWhat a beautiful explication and delightful thread. Could ED buffs be any closer to heaven?
ReplyDeleteSusan K and Anonymous nail it - Maleness dominates drinking-buddy dialog, as it does here, and “her” could be Susan D: “Dainty – as the tress – on Sue’s deft Head –”.