God does it—every Day—
Creation—but the Gambol
Of His Authority—
It's easy to efface it—
The thrifty Deity
Could scarce afford Eternity
To Spontaneity—
The Perished Patterns murmur—
But His Perturbless Plan
Proceed—inserting Here—a Sun—
There—leaving out a Man—
-F747, J724, Fascicle 37, 1863
Reading essays online about this poem, and even looking at the venerable Helen Vendler's take, one would think this was a poem that was railing against God's lack of concern for human life, but I see it the opposite way. First of all, I think Emily knew better than to blame a deity for the necessity of change, especially since she famously didn't believe in said deity. That would be a strange thing to do.
This is a poem, rather, embracing the necessity for God (read: Nature) to continually erase the old life, and invent new ones. And not only is she embracing it, but she is also identifying with it, which is why she looks at life here in terms of "Perished Patterns," and "invention." God, here, is a playful, but efficient artist. Just like Emily.
It's easy to invent a Life—
God does it—every Day—
Creation keeps on creating, life begets life. This happens every "Day." Day is presented to us here with a capital D, which clues us in that this is a life we're talking about: a "Day"represents a life, just as the "Sun," later in this poem, represents a Son.
Creation—but the Gambol
Of His Authority—
It's easy to efface it—
Of His Authority—
It's easy to efface it—
Is there some Grand Designer that plays willy nilly with life, creating and effacing at whim? Did Emily believe that, or is she setting us up here for a deeper truth?
The philosophical inquiry of this poem centers around a question: if we could live forever, what would be lost? The answer to this question is posed by Dickinson like this,
The thrifty Deity
Could scarce afford Eternity
To Spontaneity—
If you had eternity, then you would lose spontaneity. You would lose change. To be eternal is, essentially, to stay the same. That’s the thought-provoking core of this poem for me.
God, or, if you will, the universe, is thrifty. To say God is thrifty is, perhaps, to grumble. ("Hey God, how about being more generous and giving us more life!") But seen another way, to be thrifty is good, it’s efficient. Life may gambol, but it doesn’t gamble. It is invested in the future, which is only possible if it moves forward and dies to the past. God, here in the guise of the prime mover, will place a new sun/son (read: child) for every father and mother who becomes effaced. This son/sun will have something the older generation doesn’t. It doesn’t matter what that something is, so much as it matters that there is something different. Each old plan, each "Perished Pattern," meaning, chiefly, ourselves, "murmurs" about this loss and may be quite perturbed by it. But the way of the universe, in a constant state of perturbation, is to be perturbless. You can't upset upsetness itself. You can't destroy destruction.
Could scarce afford Eternity
To Spontaneity—
If you had eternity, then you would lose spontaneity. You would lose change. To be eternal is, essentially, to stay the same. That’s the thought-provoking core of this poem for me.
God, or, if you will, the universe, is thrifty. To say God is thrifty is, perhaps, to grumble. ("Hey God, how about being more generous and giving us more life!") But seen another way, to be thrifty is good, it’s efficient. Life may gambol, but it doesn’t gamble. It is invested in the future, which is only possible if it moves forward and dies to the past. God, here in the guise of the prime mover, will place a new sun/son (read: child) for every father and mother who becomes effaced. This son/sun will have something the older generation doesn’t. It doesn’t matter what that something is, so much as it matters that there is something different. Each old plan, each "Perished Pattern," meaning, chiefly, ourselves, "murmurs" about this loss and may be quite perturbed by it. But the way of the universe, in a constant state of perturbation, is to be perturbless. You can't upset upsetness itself. You can't destroy destruction.
(Or can you? She doesn't go there in this poem, but the way to immortality is explored in other poems, including F743 from this same fascicle.)
The Perished Patterns murmur—
But His Perturbless Plan
Proceed
You get a philosophical treatise just inside the pattern of those P words. The proliferation of P sounds seems to stem from the word “Plan.” You get the old Plan, which has now become "Perished Patterns," and you get the new Plan, which, in its very changeability, is Perturbless.
But His Perturbless Plan
Proceed
You get a philosophical treatise just inside the pattern of those P words. The proliferation of P sounds seems to stem from the word “Plan.” You get the old Plan, which has now become "Perished Patterns," and you get the new Plan, which, in its very changeability, is Perturbless.
Proceed—inserting Here—a Sun—
There—leaving out a Man—
We all become sun/son or daughter inserted into Eternity, and we all become, eventually, the man or woman left out. (And what a way to put it, "leaving out Man," invoking, as it does, the feeling of becoming old and left out.)
We are, indeed, as sons/suns, part and parcel of the gamboling of creation. Like lambs, we gambol, innocent young things running around a field in joyful abandon. Until we don't. Lambs to the slaughter.
But why grumble when the perturbless plan is what makes life so full of spontaneity, of surprise and wonder? Would we give that up if we could? Would we want to?
There—leaving out a Man—
We all become sun/son or daughter inserted into Eternity, and we all become, eventually, the man or woman left out. (And what a way to put it, "leaving out Man," invoking, as it does, the feeling of becoming old and left out.)
We are, indeed, as sons/suns, part and parcel of the gamboling of creation. Like lambs, we gambol, innocent young things running around a field in joyful abandon. Until we don't. Lambs to the slaughter.
But why grumble when the perturbless plan is what makes life so full of spontaneity, of surprise and wonder? Would we give that up if we could? Would we want to?
The use of the word “Authority” in the first stanza makes the poem feel like a rebellious complaint. But "Authority" is also a way to invoke the realm of the "Author."
Dickinson, as the Author of this poem, is well acquainted with the necessity to constantly invent new patterns, not to mention disrupting old ones. You could say her entire poetics is based on this idea. For the vast majority of her poems she takes “common meter,” otherwise known as "hymn meter," the signature meter of the church songs rooted in English tradition that were so pervasive in early America, and deconstructs it, both in form and content. This poem is no exception. Hymn meter is 4-3-4-3. The pattern here goes 4-3-3-3/ 3-3-4-3/ 3-3-4-3, which may well be a unique pattern among her works.
This is a poem, as I read it, about learning to accept change, including loss of self.
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Note:
Emily had no children, that we know of. Her poems may be seen as progeny, still living among us. So the last lines of this poem might be read as the gamboling of her authority:
Proceed—inserting Here—a Sun—
Proceed—inserting Here—a Sun—
There—leaving out a Man—
Or in other words, the poem is the son she has inserted here, leaving out the Man in the process.
Or in other words, the poem is the son she has inserted here, leaving out the Man in the process.
ED helpfully offered hundreds of alternative words in her 1789 manuscripts of known poems.
ReplyDeleteHere is a hopefully helpful alternative take on this poem, ‘It's easy to invent a Life -’ (F747,1863).
The first definition of the noun “gambol” in ED Lexicon (https://www.edickinson.org/words/2994) is:
“gambol [-s] n Fr. gambade, leap or spring.
1. Leap; bound; springing; unpredictable movement; lively jumping around; [fig.] sport; prank; caper; antic; cavorting; recreation; rollicking behavior; playful activity.”
My assumptions are:
1. ED’s “Gambol” means “”sport; prank; caper; antic; cavorting; recreation; rollicking behavior; playful activity.”
2. The antecedent of “it” in Line 5 is “a life” in Line 1.
3. Lines 7-8 mean: Could scarce allow "Eternity” / any “Spontaneity”.
4. Lines 11-12 literally mean: “Creating a Sun here / Leaving out a Man there”.
In Stanzas 1 & 2, ED sniped at God superciliously, closing Stanza 2 with a slap in His face:
“The thrifty Deity
Could scarce afford Eternity
To Spontaneity –”
ED claims God creates and destroys Life at whim, just for fun, and prohibits Life any “Spontaneity”.
Stanza 3 rolls like a snare drum of sarcastic Ps:
“The Perished Patterns murmur
But His Perturbless Plan
Proceed - inserting Here - a Sun -
There - leaving out a Man -”
Ouch!
I'm trying to see your reading here, but not sure I'm getting it. I don't read here that Dickinson is saying God prohibits spontaneity. God is presented here as ever inventive. Invention thrives on spontaneity.
DeleteI read it as God will not give us eternal lives because that would take away from life's spontaneity?
I think "Spontaneity" refers to the life created spontaneously, at God's whim, as described in the first stanza. Then he realizes, the miser that he is, that he cannot endow it with eternity and thus destroys it. He acts with no regard for human feelings.
DeleteIt reminds me somewhat of F581, where we have these lines:
Delete'Twere better Charity
To leave me in the Atom's Tomb —
Merry, and nought, and gay, and numb —
Than this smart Misery.
I can see that reading, though I read the lines
DeleteThe thrifty Deity
Could scarce afford Eternity
To Spontaneity—
as saying that Eternity would come at the cost of spontaneity. You can't have both. You can have a person (seen here as a pattern, or an invention) that lasts forever, OR you can let the old Patterns Perish so there is room for the new. For me this is a powerful idea because it takes my attention away from the desire to live forever and opens me up for acceptance of being, eventually, left out, as a necessity for a gamboling future. The world turns so as to keep her youth. Of course, loving our lives, we perishing patterns will murmur (a perfect verb choice) all the way to the grave, and I see a bit of that going on in this poem too.
I agree. ED seems to imply that we, the living, can be spontaneous here on Earth, but, after we die, God "could scarce afford" spontaneity to "Eternity". To me, ED's phrase, "Eternity to Spontaneity", means the same as "Spontaneity to Eternity".
DeleteED Lex defines the adverb “scarce” as “rarely; hardly; barely; slightly; scantily”. My interpretation is that “scarce” means “hardly”:
ReplyDelete“The thrifty Deity
Could hardly afford Eternity
To Spontaneity –”
Judith Farr’s 1996 ‘Chronology of Important Dates’, p. 260 in ‘A Collection of Critical Essays’, lists “1861- A crisis year of mysterious personal anguish”. Franklin’s ‘Variorum” (1998) estimates ED copied this poem into Fascicle 39 during the second half of 1863, but we don’t know when she composed it.
ED gradually emerged from that "mysterious personal anguish”, but to say she felt uncharitable toward God would be an understatement. Her anger shows in ‘It's easy to invent a Life’.
A favorite description of ED's infinite variety:
ReplyDelete“The Emily Dickinson revealed in her works is complex and inconsistent, often contradictory, moving from ecstasy to desperation, from a fervent faith to a deep suspicion and skepticism, from humility and submissiveness to defiance and scorn. She is blasphemous as often as devout, and in her poetry God is accused of petty vindictiveness and cold indifference as often as He is celebrated for benevolence or admired for His majesty.”
Sherwood, W.R., Circumference and Circumstance. 1968. p 3.
God as an unperturbed, uncaring Master Desogner sitting in front of a computer screen is a familiar trope in the genre called religious humor. I've seen cartoons showing God as gamboling away at His video game called Creation and pressing ctrl alt del with icy cool nonchalance. Our scientists tell us the universe is continuously expanding so it's not difficult to insert a sun here and there. And the perishing patterns are just binned and sometimes they don't even get a chance to murmur. The Master Designer moves from 1 level to another like any serious player would. No point getting stuck at 1 level for eternity. It all looks spontaneous to us but God works with eternity which He has kept beyond our comprehension. The Netflix animation series Exploding kittens shows God as disinterested in His creation, burning down parts of heaven and deleting unicorns. ED is similarly musing on the divine gamboling. The poem has sarcasm in spades but doesn't stop there. It continues to evolve into a sincere attempt at making sense of what's going on. Finally there is acceptance, resignation and surrender. Ok God not my will but thine
ReplyDeleteAmazing paragraph. Thank you Anon.
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