That perches in the soul—
And sings the tune without the words—
And never stops—at all—
And sweetest—in the Gale—is heard—
And sore must be the storm—
That could abash the little Bird
That kept so many warm—
I've heard it in the chillest land—
And on the strangest Sea—
Yet—never—in Extremity,
It asked a crumb—of Me.
F314
(1862) 254
Common Yellow Throat William Wander |
This is one of the most well-known poems of Emily Dickinson. The first
line, with its substitution of “thing with feathers” for “bird” gives the
reader an immediate discovery moment. And it seems right, too. Hope is rather
like a bird “perch[ing] in the soul” and, at least for some people, who never
stops. Dickinson was apparently one of those lucky souls whose hope never died—or
at least it hadn’t died by 1862. The essence of hope, as Dickinson portrays it, is that it “never
stops” singing its tune, no matter how difficult the circumstances—and yet it
never asks for even “a crumb” to keep going.
This
is, as are many of Dickinson’s poems, written in standard hymn form: four-line
stanzas with iambic tetrameter alternating with iambic trimeter. The rhyme
scheme is loosely ABAB, but Dickinson plays with it a little. The “er” sound in
“feathers” does go well with the same sound in “words,” although it isn’t such
a close slant rhyme as “soul” with “all” or “storm” with “warm.” The “er” sound
is carried through the poem, however, adding aural unity: perches, feathers,
words, never, heard, Bird, heard, never—and, related, storm and warm.
Can you please explain the second stanza? Thanks. Ali
ReplyDeleteHi Ali - the first step in that stanza is to turn it into 'normal' English. Dickinson here as in most other poems simply leaves out words or changes normal order. If I work to do that I get:
DeleteThe bird sings most sweetly in a gale.
It would have to be a very severe storm
That could quiet the little bird
Whose song has warmed so many people.
Look it over and see if you agree with my interpretation.
Your dedication is amazing, and i love that you answer questions so generously.
ReplyDeleteThis poem has always been a favorite. Indeed, she was lucky to believe that hope would always sing in her life—a free and generous gift!
Thank you, Laura for this and other kind comments!
DeleteHi. Wonder if you’d ever consider an unpacking of what might be considered the ‘Hope Trilogy’ - this one, ‘Hope is a strange invention,’ and ‘Hope is a subtle glutton.’ Would love to hear your thoughts on…what is going on here, haha, these do not strike me as unabashedly pro Hope pieces!
ReplyDeleteSorry -- falling well behind on just going one by one through the poems. But I encourage you to take a stab at it and post it here! Sounds very interesting!
DeleteOmg thank you for replying, you are a poetry-unpacking god to me. Well, short of a lengthy exegesis, the interesting thing is the 1860s usage of the word ‘hope,’ which I really think denoted ‘unseeing faith in god,’ tune without words, if you will, uninterrogatable, asking not a thing, yadda. I mean, how likely is someone literally denounced as a no hoper to write a poem that correctly interpreted results in tens of thousands of people to get bird tattoos? I think those tattoos are probably in error.
ReplyDeleteAs I see it, the most compelling evidence that this poem might often be misunderstood, and is possibly more skeptical irony than straightforward praise (the latter causing people to ink opon themselves the aforementioned tattoos of birds) is that "Hope" is in quotation marks - not to mention, as the comment above does: the tune being without words - when words meant so much to ED- and stood for meaning. Might this "No-Hoper" have used "Hope" to describe the practice of "the meek members of the Resurrection?"
ReplyDeleteExcept that Hope is warming -- its tune may have no words but it creates a positive feeling. I imagine the poetry springs from that -- the words come because the thing with feathers is so tuneful. the 'meek members' seem to have no such warmth, nor words.
Deleteex. B:
ReplyDeleteHe would declare and could himself believe
That the birds there in all the garden round
From having heard the daylong voice of Eve
Had added to their own an oversound,
Her *tone of meaning but without the words.*
And I take that to be a good thing....
ReplyDeleteI wonder if Frost was referencing this poem in his.
Thanks for this!
I think he MUST have been referencing ED! What a connection (I should point out it’s a different Anonymous who made the connection). I know they have/ had Amherst in common, but is there any documentation of Frost reading Dickinson? Though of course it would have been the bowdlerized version…
ReplyDeleteI agree -- great connection. Some 'Anonymous' person should write it up!
DeleteYES!
DeleteThe optimism in this poem tells me ED may have been deeply depressed at times but never a serious contender for death by suicide:
ReplyDelete“I've heard it [hope] in the chillest land [deepest depression]— / And in the strangest Sea [my most bizarre moods] / Yet—never—in Extremity [It always] / It asked a crumb—of Me. [is present in my soul]”
She and we are lucky for the power of her will to live. Many post-romantic poets have trod a different path.