I shall keep singing!
Birds will pass me
On their way to Yellower Climes –
Each – with a Robin's expectation –
I – with my Redbreast –
And my Rhymes –
Late – when I take my place in summer –
But – I shall bring a fuller tune –
Vespers – are sweeter than Matins – Signor –
Morning – only the seed of Noon –
F270
(1861) 250
The poet claims her poems will make a “fuller tune” compared to other
poet “Birds” who pass her on their way to sunnier locations with their chapbooks of verse and their “Robin’s
expectation” of spring. Their poems may be heard first and gain some attention.
But the poet is also a robin – she has a “Redbreast” too! And she has her “Rhymes.”
(And sure enough, “Rhymes” rhymes perfectly with “Climes.”) The poet probably won’t arrive in
Poetville until summer, rather than spring, but that is okay for her poems are
deeper and more complex than the frothy stuff other poets were dishing up at
that time – and she knows it.
Dickinson
then moves into images of morning, noon, and evening. Vespers and Matins are prayer
services of Catholic and some Protestant churches that typically feature
psalms and other religious poems set to music. Vespers is the evening service
and Dickinson finds them “sweeter” than the morning Matins service. There is fullness at the end of the day, a sense of mature completion, and Dickinson believes her poetry will be the Vespers to the less mature Matins of others. Mornings, she continues, are "only" the "seed" – the hope and potentiality – of noon.
There is a second sense to the second stanza. She seems to be implying that even her own poetry is getting better as her "day" progresses. Her “Noon”– always a symbol to her of fullness – is the ripening and unfolding of her morning – the fruition of her poetic promise.
Sample of Dickinson's poetry as it appeared in her fascicles |
The
poem is address to a “Signor” – a rather droll way of saying “Sir” – as if this
person had wondered when Dickinson was ever going to publish or to bloom as a
poet. Not now, she is saying. What you’ve seen of my poetry so far is just “morning”:
it is just the seed of what is to come.
The comment raises an interesting question. Dickinson submitted some
poems for publication, was not strongly encouraged, and then seemed to
disparage the idea of publication, calling it “the auction of the mind.” Yet
she kept page after page of poems, even scraps of paper with poems scribbled on
them. Many of these poems, about 800!, she fastened together in little booklets
that scholars sometimes refer to as ‘fascicles.’ These fascicles were surely
meant to be read. Dickinson was writing for the future. I suspect this allowed
her to develop that “fuller tune.” Could she be more honest, bare her soul more
deeply than had she been writing for publication at the time? I think so, and I’m
glad she had the self confidence and patience to keep writing and to save her
work.
I'm glad too! I wonder if she is also red-breasted from being stabbed in the heart...
ReplyDeleteQ1. Who’s the unexpected “Signor” appearing suddenly at poem’s end? My vote goes to Rev. Wadsworth. Franklin’s estimated date of composition is late 1861, which precedes ED’s first letter to Higginson. Wadsworth pastored in Philadelphia until April 1862. The “droll” tone of “Signor” matches the opening tone of Master Letter 3, which Franklin dates early 1862: “Oh, did I offend it- [Did'nt it want me to tell it the truth] Daisy - Daisy-offend it-who bends her smaller life to his . . .”
ReplyDeleteQ2. What does ED mean in Line 5 when she says “I – with my Redbreast –”? For one thing, she’s just mentioned “Robin’s expectation”, and ‘Robin Redbreast’ is a common nickname of the bird. However, here she says “my Redbreast”. I think she means literally.
Just three poems ago, F267, she told us she has freckles on her bosom. We know ED had auburn (red) hair and can infer a fair complexion. In F131, ‘Tho’ my destiny be Fustian’, she told us “I would far prefer, / still, my little sunburnt bosom / To her Rosier”. For a Victorian woman, she seems mighty frank about her “Redbreast”.
Thank you for the references in ED's poems about the 'sunburnt bosom'!
DeleteAstonishing two words coming from ED. Can you imagine a crafty paparazzi sneaking a photo of ED sunbathing topless in her garden?
DeleteSorry, competition is great for improving products, but this boasting self-comparison of ED with other, lesser poets borders on insecurity. If you know you’re a poet of the ages, you don’t need to crow about it.
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