The Robin is the One
That interrupt the Morn
With hurried—few—express Reports
When March is scarcely on—
The Robin is the One
That overflow the Noon
With her cherubic quantity—
An April but begun—
The Robin is the One
That speechless from her Nest
Submit that Home—and Certainty
And Sanctity, are best
With hurried—few—express Reports
When March is scarcely on—
The Robin is the One
That overflow the Noon
With her cherubic quantity—
An April but begun—
The Robin is the One
That speechless from her Nest
Submit that Home—and Certainty
And Sanctity, are best
F501
(1863) J828
Dickinson
uses one of her favorite birds to illustrate a good bit of a woman's life. The
robin, a symbol of rejuvenation and harbinger of spring, goes from young and
hurried to mature and nurturing. I suspect Dickinson might have watched a
similar progression in some of her best girl friends. The poem uses three
stanzas for three stages.
We begin with the robin dashing into
the scene of emerging spring – early March. Having probably just arrived at her
breeding territory, she blurts out a bit of gossip or perhaps "express
Reports" of the season. Mainly, she's announcing her arrival and
availability. Her song "interrupt[s] the otherwise quiet Morn." The second stanza takes us to the noon of the day, the prime of life. The robin's songs fill the air, sweet and pure as the song of a cherub. Note that the robin's song "overflow[s]" Noon. One season into spring and her sweet joy fills the day. No doubt a mate is near. (Yes, we know now that it is the male who does most of the singing, but I think Dickinson is thinking of young women here at the peak of their ripe and innocent beauty. They are charming and beautiful, whereas the male of the human species must remain more drab and pragmatic.)
The question Dickinson leaves us is whether or not the robin has made a good trade. She has lost her song, become "speechless" in her nest. While the bird may find this to be the best state, I suspect Dickinson has other ideas. She herself never became speechless, never erased herself for the sake of nest and babies. In her poetry she continues to sing, although a deeper and often darker song than many of the lighthearted poetry of her younger years. Dickinson does retreat to her own nest – her familial home and her private room – but she continues to sing.
The
poem is tightly constructed, particularly through the repetition of "The
Robin is the One" as the first line of each stanza. Slant rhymes of
"One" complete numerous other lines: Morn, on, Noon, begun. The
first, second and fourth lines of each stanza are in iambic trimeter, with the
third line in tetrameter. The clear, strong meter and rhyme produce a sense of
predictability that, in Dickinson's trademark manner, she overturns in the last
few phrases. The reader is glad that the robin is a good nesting mother, but
can't help but feel sad for the loss of her song, particularly for such
ambiguous states as "Certainty" and "Sanctity."
Welcome back!
ReplyDeleteGuess it says something about the novel ...
DeleteBut thanks! Need that Dickinson brain work out.
One interesting aspect of this poem is that ED uses a singular noun (Robin) as subject of each stanza, emphasizing the singular with the words "is the One". She then uses a plural verb (interrupt, overflow, submit). The actual subject in some sense comes after the verb (Reports, quantity, Certainty and Sanctity).
ReplyDeleteThe odd syntax creates a jarring effect the echoes the meaning of the word "interrupt" in the first stanza. I like it. I don't think that there is more to it than that.
Yes, that's interesting; I hadn't thought about it. It does give an interrupted, tumbled quality -- as if the "One" is standing for the Many.
DeleteI agree that the three plural verbs sound better. However, I disagree that there is any grammatical excuse for using plural verbs: “quantity” is singular, not plural, and “that Home—and Certainty / And Sanctity, are best” is the direct object of “Robin . . . submit”, not the “actual subject” of “Robin . . . submit”. Editors of The Atlantic Monthly (October 1891) simply could not abide the grammar error and corrected the verbs to singular, just the stuff ED complained of and came to expect from editors.
DeleteED used plural verbs because she thought they sounded better. Her academic "Promotion and Tenure Committee" wasn't looking over her shoulder for grammatical correctness.
What line in the first stanza describes the Robin's song
ReplyDeleteYou might find it most easily by process of elimination.
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