Like Flowers, that heard the news of
Dews,
But never deemed the dripping prize
Awaited their—low Brows—
Or Bees—that thought the Summer's
name
Some rumor of Delirium,
No Summer—could—for Them—
Or Arctic Creatures, dimly stirred—
By Tropic Hint—some Travelled Bird
Imported to the Wood—
Or Wind's bright signal to the Ear—
Making that homely, and severe,
Contented, known, before—
The Heaven—unexpected come,
To Lives that thought the Worshipping
A too presumptuous Psalm –
F361
(1862) 513
Some
folks just don’t believe they are worthy of honors, love, or even heaven. They
are like those flowers that have heard, but dismissed as not for them, talk of
dew—the delicious water that wonderfully condenses overnight, dripping down to
the soil as the sun heats the morning. They are like the bees that never
believe in summer. That “delirium” of nectar and warm sun and welcoming
flowers? Not for them. Must be for some other bees.
Those seemingly unworthy folks are also
like creatures way up in the Arctic who are “dimly stirred” by what they heard
from some travelling bird about the rich and beautiful forests of the temperate
latitudes. Such a paradise is not for me, they sigh. I belong in the frigid and
wind-swept northern climes.
What would these humble folks do, should
Heaven “unexpected come” to them? That’s the “Wind’s bright signal to the Ear”:
Heaven is coming—to you! What a powerful joy—perhaps overwhelming. The person
to whom the wind might signal the approach of heaven had been so modest and
humble that even the idea of worship seemed too presumptuous, a psalm that
might be rejected.
The poem is a tribute to those unexpected
moments of grace that come unbidden and unexpected to even the least of us (or
perhaps particularly to the least of us). Dickinson, who didn’t stand up in
church or community to claim her Christian salvation, who refrained from church
going—did she harbor the idea that worship was presumptuous? It seems
consistent with other poems she had written to date. At times she looks at
heaven as a teasing and elusive bee,
the apple
just out of reach, or the circus tent
that packs up and leaves overnight. In poems such as “As
Watchers hang upon the East,” she thinks of heaven as that desired place
where beggars can “revel at a feast.” In “I
can’t tell you—but you feel it,” she senses heaven but feels it best to be
“Modest,” and suggests that she and the reader “walk among it / With our faces
veiled / As they say polite Archangels / Do in meeting God!”
Such
modesty is the subject of this poem. Know hope!
She seems to be saying heaven unexpected comes NOT through hearing the news of or thinking thoughts about but through a different kind of worshipping.
ReplyDeleteEmily is always good with the soundscape, but this one is especially worth stopping, like a bee, and reveling in the delirium of the language. The language mimics (or is itself) the unexpected heaven come. It starts right off with that delightful "news of dews" and then the second stanza, a tour de force of linguistic music:
ReplyDeleteOr Bees—that thought the Summer's name
Some rumor of Delirium,
No Summer—could—for Them
Also, rereading out loud I hear all those z sounds in the first stanza, which sets so wonderfully sets up the bees at the beginning of the second stanza. It creates a buzz! There's something I've never noticed before, the word bees is onomatopoeic, sounds like itself, has a buzz.
ReplyDeleteThose 'm's: Summer's, name, rumor, Delirium, Summer, Them -- in three lines! The word 'murmur' just plants itself suggestively in the midst.
DeleteAnd the buzzing bees! Thank you for pointing all this out!
ED's manuscript has five stanzas, all tercets.
ReplyDeleteStanza 1 has four Zs announcing “Bees” in Stanza 2: news, dews, prize, browse.
ReplyDeleteAnd, arguably, flowers. It’s Buzzier than a bee in clover.
ReplyDeleteStanza 4's a toughie.
ReplyDeleteDoes the demonstrative pronoun "that" refer to "signal" in Line 10, followed by four modifiers of the pronoun: homely, severe, contented, known?
If so, does the adverb "before" segue into Stanza 5: "before // the Heaven — unexpected come,"?
A penny for an answer.
If a poem puzzles, simmer it in subconscious for a night or two.
ReplyDeleteThe poem’s key:
ED intended the reader to supply the poem's first two words, “I am”, and, for each of Stanza 2-4s “Or”s, substitute “I am like”.
An interpretation:
[I am] Like Flowers, that heard the news of Dews,
But never deemed the dripping prize
Awaited their—low Brows—
[I am like] Bees—that thought the Summer's name
Some rumor of Delirium,
No Summer—could—for Them—
[I am like] Arctic Creatures, dimly stirred—
By Tropic Hint—some Travelled Bird
Imported to the Wood—
[I am like] Wind's bright signal to the Ear—
Making that [which is] homely, and severe,
Contented, [and] known, · · ·
[before—] The Heaven—unexpected come,
To Lives that thought the Worshipping
A too presumptuous Psalm –
‘Like Flowers, that heard the news of Dews’ is an inimitable love poem to Charles Wadsworth. ED couldn’t “wash that man right out of her hair.” She died loving him.
By "inimitable" I mean worthy of Shakespeare.
PS: "The Heaven" is Charles Wadsworth, per their prenuptial agreement.
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