Some – keep the Sabbath – going to Church –
I – keep it – staying at Home –
With
a Bobolink – for a Chorister –
And
an Orchard – for a Dome –
Some – keep the Sabbath, in Surplice –
I – just wear my Wings –
And
instead of tolling the bell, for church,
Our
little Sexton – sings –
'God' – preaches – a noted Clergyman –
And
the sermon is never long,
So – instead of getting to Heaven – at last –
I'm – going – all along!
F236 (1861)
Van Gogh also enjoyed the Church of Nature |
This
was one of only seven poems that was published during Dickinson’s lifetime. It
was one of a set of four that she sent her “Preceptor” Thomas Wentworth
Higginson. He had complained about her “spasmodic gait” since her poems often
flouted the formal and controlled poetic conventions of the time. In this poem
she keeps the meter and rhyme steady and conventional throughout. It’s a “church
of nature” poem that is still widely anthologized. Along with “Because I could
not stop for Death,” it is one most people think of when thinking of Emily
Dickinson.
By
the time this poem was written Dickinson had taken to keeping the Sabbath “at
Home” rather than “going to Church.” But here she demonstrates that she has
found better substitutes for all the elements of the service: The Bobolink
leads the hymns, the branching trees of the family orchard form a domed
ceiling, and God Himself (“a noted Clergyman”!) preaches. Unlike the Calvinist
preachers of New England, though (and throughout the U.S., in fact), he keeps
the sermons short!
The
“surplice” that she foregoes in favor of her Wings would be the broad,
open-sleeved, half-length tunic that clergy and choir members still wear today.
The poet must feel a rung above as she has graduated to wearing angelic, or at
least Cherubic, Wings. Bells aren’t needed for this church when there are
robins and Bobolinks and other songbirds to call the poet to worship.
It's possible that they're a spare pair of bobolink wings, for those who didn't bring their own.
ReplyDeleteED’s 1861 poem, ‘Some – Keep the sabbath’, reads without ambiguity, seems to state simply why ED doesn’t attend brick-and-mortar church, and is too honest to be innocent. Where’s the hidden message? It’s one of four poems she enclosed with an 1862 letter to T. W. Higginson seeking poetic guidance or at least reassurance of her poetic prospects.
ReplyDelete"Odyous of olde been comparisonis", (John Lydgate , 1440, ‘Debate between a horse, goose, and sheep’), and something’s odious in ‘Some – Keep the sabbath’. Susan K smelled it: “The poet must feel a rung above as she has graduated to wearing angelic, or at least Cherubic, Wings”.
Talk about comparison-contrast essays, this is a comparison-contrast poem:
Going to church v Staying home
Chorister v Bobolink
Dome v Orchard
Surplice v Wings
Sexton v Song bird
Clergyman v God
Getting to Heaven - at last v Going - all along
Who wouldn’t want to join her? Madison Avenue has nothing on ED.
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