tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4029797379711350813.post7484164297382696080..comments2024-03-28T14:04:54.557-07:00Comments on the prowling Bee: The Outer — from the InnerSusan Kornfeldhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05384011972647144453noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4029797379711350813.post-26667862871133379342024-03-16T23:43:38.192-07:002024-03-16T23:43:38.192-07:00Reminds me of Freud: "He that has eyes to see...Reminds me of Freud: "He that has eyes to see and ears to hear may convince himself that no mortal can keep a secret. If his lips are silent, he chatters with his fingertips; betrayal oozes out of him at every pore."Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4029797379711350813.post-21227110885302075442023-09-13T07:27:27.601-07:002023-09-13T07:27:27.601-07:00“Arterial”, used as an adjective to describe an ar...“Arterial”, used as an adjective to describe an artist’s canvas, is an ED original, intentional or unintentional. She used the word in poems only once, here in this poem, possibly as word play.<br /><br />The OED defines the adjective “arterial” only in the medical sense, in the American-English sense, “arterial road”, or as a color, “arterial red”. Likewise, ED’s Webster defined “arterial” only in the medical sense. Even the ED Lexicon defines “arterial” first in the medical sense, second in the figurative sense as “living; animate”, and only third as word play on the word ‘art’, artistic.<br />Larry Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02810899482852120751noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4029797379711350813.post-37131700316708481402023-09-12T17:03:51.237-07:002023-09-12T17:03:51.237-07:00ED loved riddles. Both her inner and outer lives a...ED loved riddles. Both her inner and outer lives are riddles. Her poems are riddles. <br /><br />She shrouded her entire life in secrecy, not meant for our eyes. We know almost nothing solid about her relationship with Susan Gilbert before her marriage with Austin. We know almost nothing about her relationship with Charles Wadsworth. Ditto with Samuel Bowles. Speculation rules much of her life’s history, providing job security for both academics and brazen amateurs.<br /><br />ED tells us in ‘The Outer — from the Inner’:<br /><br />“The Star's whole Secret — in the Lake —<br />Eyes were not meant to know.”<br /><br />All we know is what she chooses to tell us, maddening, yes, addicting, yes, sublime coquetry, yes. <br /><br />Poor Judge Otis Lord, ED’s late life suitor, asked her to marry him, or at least share his life for his remaining years. Here is her answer, “Dont you know you are happiest while I withhold and not confer – dont you know that ‘No’ is the wildest word we consign to Language?” That’s what we get too, when we delve too deep.<br />Larry Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02810899482852120751noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4029797379711350813.post-68983197718421635202023-07-25T05:17:52.444-07:002023-07-25T05:17:52.444-07:00I've been studying Emily's poetry and find...I've been studying Emily's poetry and find your blog very helpful. Even though I took a number of collegiate english courses, I find her poetry difficult.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4029797379711350813.post-6384745282368858252020-08-29T07:07:28.833-07:002020-08-29T07:07:28.833-07:00Good astronomical observation! Dwarf would play i...Good astronomical observation! Dwarf would play into that also, as does the spinning of the wheel flinging dust. Pphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01023162636086533197noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4029797379711350813.post-34577583198988753802013-05-25T06:35:53.820-07:002013-05-25T06:35:53.820-07:00Yes, I had a hard time wanting to dive into this p...Yes, I had a hard time wanting to dive into this poem, so kept putting it off. Thanks for your excellent points – which made me more interested in the poem! <br /> I think the regularity of rhyme and rhythm (why do those dissimilar words share such an odd sequence of letters?) coupled with the short lines give the poem a certain childish quality. At times Dickinson uses this to deliver a stroke of devilish irony, but not here.<br /> BTW, I was originally going with "lake" as the artist's color as in crimson lake or madder lake. It was only when I realized that Dickinson had hemmed the lake in between cheek and brow that I started reading it as eyes. <br /> Susan Kornfeldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05384011972647144453noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4029797379711350813.post-57305816311917771162013-05-25T04:52:42.104-07:002013-05-25T04:52:42.104-07:00Beautiful commentary. I did not immediately see t... Beautiful commentary. I did not immediately see the metaphors of the lakes as the eyes -- but you are right, of course.<br /><br /> "Arterial canvas" is a wonderful phrase. It is also nice how "magnitude" in the first stanza ties to the metaphor of the star in the last.<br /><br /> This poem, more than some of EDs poems and suited to its subject, has a very regular rhythm and rhymes that are "perfect" or near perfect. The poem also has a symmetry that is masterful. The first two stanzas have metaphors based on science and technology. The first stanza begins (as science does) from the outer and moves to the inner. The third stanza begins (as art does) with the inner and moves to the outer. The word "fine" in the second and fourth stanzas help create the symmetry. <br /><br /> I find this poem less interesting than poems that deal with more difficult, less straightforward subjects where the sounds of the poem reflect and evoke emotion, discordance or a less rational level of experience.<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com