tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4029797379711350813.post6267630361783728015..comments2024-03-29T00:07:13.458-07:00Comments on the prowling Bee: Water, is taught by thirst.Susan Kornfeldhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05384011972647144453noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4029797379711350813.post-68784519776970840412022-06-26T20:54:30.620-07:002022-06-26T20:54:30.620-07:00Everybody knows that the bird is the word!
Everybody knows that the bird is the word!<br />Susan Kornfeldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05384011972647144453noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4029797379711350813.post-42904004454799498382022-06-26T17:34:14.526-07:002022-06-26T17:34:14.526-07:00ED summarized all literature in this six-line poem...ED summarized all literature in this six-line poem:<br /><br />Water is taught by thirst<br />Home, by absence <br />Pleasure, by pain<br />Peace, by war<br />Love, by loss<br />Summer, by winter<br /><br />Susan K deconstructed this poem in eight lines:<br /><br />Rhyme A A B C C B. <br />A & C trimeter,<br />B dimeter.<br />First foot, trochaic,<br />Second, iambic.<br />Economic last line,<br />Four monosyllables,<br />Visual, oral strength.<br /><br />First Corinthians 13: 13 summarized this poem and Susan’s deconstruction in one line: <br /><br />And now abideth water, land, transport, peace, love, birds, these six; but the greatest of these is birds.<br />Larry Bnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4029797379711350813.post-64182761030168028702022-02-02T11:14:44.656-08:002022-02-02T11:14:44.656-08:00lol
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