tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4029797379711350813.post4787139774433113300..comments2024-03-29T00:07:13.458-07:00Comments on the prowling Bee: It troubled me as once I was —Susan Kornfeldhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05384011972647144453noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4029797379711350813.post-18497692236747322242023-11-02T08:54:05.073-07:002023-11-02T08:54:05.073-07:00“The poem begins with a charming chiasmus – the re...“The poem begins with a charming chiasmus – the reversal of grammatical structure in "as once I was" and "I was once" – that suggests a story or fable.” <br /><br />Once I looked up “chiasmus”, chiasmus looked up me. <br /><br />The the beginning of this poem “suggests a fable”, it is one: ‘Henny Penny’, AKA ‘Chicken Little’, AKA ‘The Flight of the Beasts’ (Jataka Tale 322, circa 500 BCE):<br /><br />Once upon time when Brahmadatta reigned in Benares, the Bodhisatta came to life as a young lion. And when fully grown he lived in a wood. At this time there was near the Western Ocean a grove of palms mixed with vilva trees. A certain hare lived here beneath a palm sapling, at the foot of a vilva tree. One day this hare after feeding came and lay down beneath the young palm tree. And the thought struck him: "If this earth should be destroyed, what would become of me?" And at this very moment a ripe vilva fruit fell on a palm leaf.<br /><br />At the sound of it, the hare thought: "This solid earth is collapsing," and starting up he fled, without so much as looking behind him. Another hare saw him scampering off, as if frightened to death, and asked the cause of his panic flight. "Pray, don't ask me," he said. The other hare cried, "Pray, Sir, what is it? " and kept running after him. <br /><br />Then the hare stopped a moment and without looking back said, "The earth here is breaking up, . . . .", etc., etc..<br /><br />You can fill in the rest. ED’s in her heaven, chuckling “Gotcha”.<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4029797379711350813.post-44977572427445263662020-09-28T06:19:39.275-07:002020-09-28T06:19:39.275-07:00I’m still confused about the bee - It seems there ...I’m still confused about the bee - It seems there is no bee who brews “steadfast honey.” It doesn’t seem to be about a bee living or dying, but if he represents the “heaven we chase” then this “heaven we chase” cannot be the “steadfast honey” - so what IS the “steadfast honey”? The boy is the one homesick for it. He may think he wants Heaven (the bee), but he really wants the “steadfast honey” though he doesn’t know it. <br />Whew! I want me some “steadfast honey!”Pphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01023162636086533197noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4029797379711350813.post-79275899530385343402019-11-09T02:05:39.402-08:002019-11-09T02:05:39.402-08:00You completed a few fine points there. I did a sea...You completed a few fine points there. I did a search on the subject and found nearly all persons will go along with with your blog. <a href="https://afbdog.co.nz/product/mated-queen-bees-for-sale/" rel="nofollow">virgin queen bees for sale nz</a>Optimus Primehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12417271496230813353noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4029797379711350813.post-79975745077053864482014-02-06T10:56:23.644-08:002014-02-06T10:56:23.644-08:00Beautiful poem, beautifully explained.Beautiful poem, beautifully explained.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4029797379711350813.post-16429657415944646622014-02-06T03:29:53.305-08:002014-02-06T03:29:53.305-08:00I get your points--what makes me worry slightly fo...I get your points--what makes me worry slightly for the "Bee" is that it's small, and the school boy is huge and comparison and presumably naughty. "Invites"--sounds like an invitation that shouldn't have been sent. In "Dips-evades-teases-deploys-" I see real danger. Once the bee lifts his boat to the sky, he's completely heedless of the boy. "Heedless" invites additional worry from the reader. It's not that he's far away from the boy, just that his sights are elsewhere. There is still danger here--at least, I think there is. "Mocking sky" can refer to both that it's unattainable to the bee, but that it's the only place safe away from the boy, but a place he can't go. To me, there is an Icarus feel to the poem. <br /><br />I don't think the 'Bee' dies at the end, but just that the possibility exists. "Flies not" also leaves it ambiguous. If the Bee has made it to the sky and is flying in the direction of the sky, how can it stop flying even temporarily, it would tumble down back to earth. If it makes it to the mocking sky, unlike Icarus, then it's made it to heaven, and no longer needs to fly. Either way, the possibility leads to death. The third option would be to fly on earth after a short respite not on a clover but just somwhere, but "flies not" does not clarify if this is the case. It leaves it open!Zefirinohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05826052577521342639noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4029797379711350813.post-86781953738054681852014-02-05T07:59:49.407-08:002014-02-05T07:59:49.407-08:00In that last stanza she is looking ahead in the fu...In that last stanza she is looking ahead in the future where she will hopefully learn the answers to what puzzled her while alive on earth -- so I don't think we are meant to think that she has yet given up her puzzling. <br /><br />As to the June bee -- as a symbol for heaven (it is "like the June bee") it probably can't be swatted down by a boy. And Dickinson is very specific as to why it is no longer close to being in reach -- it has flown away as the boy watched. <br /><br />I do think that "Ah" expresses a realization, as you suggest. But I think she is realizing that heaven's honey is never going to be "steadfast" -- at least in the way that humans desire. Susan Kornfeldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05384011972647144453noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4029797379711350813.post-5820135000392845772014-02-05T02:10:41.709-08:002014-02-05T02:10:41.709-08:00I enjoy the 'June Bee' poem more, but this...I enjoy the 'June Bee' poem more, but this pretty interesting too.<br /><br />She writes in the past tense, indicating a partial resolution to her quandary. She ends the 'June Bee' poem with "Ah, the Bee flies not\\ That brews that rare variety." I think it's possible to read that line as saying "the bee has died"--maybe, swatted by the boy. It's a terrible thought. Instead, if we see it as saying the "Bee is no longer flying to let nectars on flowers sweeten," it's a slightly gentler thought. The 'Ah' in the second last line may indicated a realization on ED's part: almost like she's considering the 'June Bee's' fate.<br /><br />In this poem, as you write, she expresses puzzlement as to why heaven doesn't just tumble down on her. I see the past tense in the poem suggesting that this is a problem/puzzle she's just let be, like the 'June Bee,' giving his lover a rest after joyful teasing.Zefirinohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05826052577521342639noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4029797379711350813.post-67224942087159107112014-02-05T02:08:39.221-08:002014-02-05T02:08:39.221-08:00This comment has been removed by the author.Zefirinohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05826052577521342639noreply@blogger.com