Smiling back from
Coronation
May be Luxury —
On the Heads that started with us —
Being's Peasantry —
Recognizing in Procession
Ones We former knew —
When Ourselves were also dusty —
Centuries ago —
Had the Triumph no Conviction
Of how many be —
Stimulated — by the Contrast —
Unto Misery —
May be Luxury —
On the Heads that started with us —
Being's Peasantry —
Recognizing in Procession
Ones We former knew —
When Ourselves were also dusty —
Centuries ago —
Had the Triumph no Conviction
Of how many be —
Stimulated — by the Contrast —
Unto Misery —
J385, Fr651 (1863)
This poem might
be grouped with others where either Dickinson claims and celebrates her calling
as a Poet or else among those where she recounts a transcendent experience. But
while both of those poem groups reflect an almost ecstatic confidence, the
current poem seems quite breezy, even condescending, by comparison. The speaker
would like to smile after her Coronation, but decides it would be a luxury –
and tacky, really – because in the
Procession she would see folks she knew from the distant past, people who
"started" with her, and many others – all of whom would be
"Stimulated … Unto Misery" by contrasting themselves to her. At least
some of those in the Procession, those who began with the speaker, are
dismissed as "Being's Peasantry". Ouch.
St. John sees the crowned saints |
Some
scholars have suggested that passages in the biblical book of Revelations are
the basis of the poem. Cristanne Miller, for example, writes that the poem
"probably refers to passages in Revelation such as 2:10, 'be thou faithful
unto death, and I will give thee a crown of life,' and 20:4, 'And I saw
thrones, and they sat upon them … and they lived and reigned with Christ a
thousand years'" (Emily Dickinson's
Poems As She Preserved Them, n. 276, p. 763). Sadly, those people who did
not make that first cut must wait in the grave until the second Resurrection
where they stand before God for judgment (Revelation 20:12-13). In this
reading, the speaker would be figuratively counting herself among the crowned martyrs.
This may be a sort of triumph fantasy
where the person considered by others to be a spiritual risk has found her way
to salvation or at least experiencing the mixed emotions when after
experiencing an epiphany or transcendent spiritual experience one rejoins quotidean
human existence.
It is likely,
however, that Dickinson is using biblical language to celebrate the internal coronation
she has come to feel as a poet. In “For
this—accepted Breath” (J195, Fr230), for example, Dickinson claims
an immortal crown because of her calling as a Poet – and a great one – and
calls on the archangel Gabriel and the Saints to proclaim it.
But
it is her paean to poets, "This
was a Poet" (J448, Fr446), two hundred poems ago, that seems most like
the current poem. The notion of immortality is front and center there. The Poet,
she asserts, is "Exterior – to Time." The Poet "Entitles Us – by
Contrast – to ceaseless Poverty –". Likewise in the current poem, the
poet, still bedazzled by that mixture of epiphany and confidence whereby she
experienced a personal "Coronation" crowning her poetic calling,
looks at those around her, those who are dusty, just as she was "Centuries
ago." The dustiness is that of the earth, for without the divine spark, we
are but flesh and blood. These are "Being's Peasantry" – those tied
to life's appetites, achievements and failures, just as a peasant is tied to a
parcel of land.
Poetically, nothing tingles or surprises.
But I do appreciate the rhyming pair of "Luxury" and Peasantry.
I would be very interested in readers'
opinions. What have I missed?